Story Judging Place

[Carlos Bernard]

Please judge the stories as they come in.

The categories for scoring are as follows:
-Coherency: Does the story have a flow, or is it a mindless ramble that is hard to follow?
-Grammar: No mistakes like your/you're confusion or sentences that make no sense
-Fun: Was the story fun to read?
-Relation to the game

Each category is worth 10 points. Each judge will score out of 40.

[Carlos Bernard]

Jimmy (minus 10 points for under 400)

Coherency: 4/10
Grammar: 5/10
Fun: 5/10
Relation: 1/10

15/40

Na Onka

Coherency: 9/10
Grammar: 9/10
Fun: 9/10
Relation: 10/10

37/40

Gillian

Coherency: 9/10
Grammar: 10/10
Fun: 8/10
Relation: 7/10

34/40

Joel

Coherency: 9/10
Grammar: 8/10
Fun: 1/10
Relation: 10/10

28/40

Julie

Coherency: 7/10
Grammar: 8/10
Fun: 7/10
Relation: 8/10

30/40

Matty

Coherency: 8/10
Grammar: 8/10
Fun: 9/10
Relation: 7/10

32/40

Sarah

Coherency: 8/10
Grammar: 6/10
Fun: 8/10
Relation: 8/10

30/40

[Rodger Bingham]

Sarah Jones - This caught me up a lot! I loved it haha can't thank her enough. 39/40

Coherency: 10/10
Grammar: 9/10
Fun: 10/10
Relation: 10/10


Jimmy Johnson - Hated it - 13/40

Coherency: 4/10
Grammar: 5/10
Fun: 2/10
Relation: 2/10


Gillian Larson - Kinda cool, but it wasn't the best - 31/40

Coherency: 8/10
Grammar: 9/10
Fun: 7/10
Relation: 7/10


Joel Anderson - Honestly i soooo did not want to read this, it was soo bland and blaaah lol. It was just executed really poorly, even though it was informative. 27/40

Coherency: 4/10
Grammar: 7/10
Fun: 1/10
Relation: 10/10


NaOnka Mixon - WAY TOO LONG!!!!!!!!! - 29/40

Coherency: 5/10
Grammar: 9/10
Fun: 5/10
Relation: 10/10


Matty Whitmore - INCREDIBLE! 40/40

Coherency: 10/10
Grammar: 10/10
Fun: 10/10
Relation: 10/10


Julie Berry - Haha this was pretty fun to read - 35/40

Coherency: 9/10
Grammar: 8/10
Fun: 10/10
Relation: 8/10

[Carlos Bernard]

thanks rodger!

[Carlos Bernard]

Gillian - 29
i) 9
ii) 7
iii) 4
iv) 9

Sarah - 30
i) 6
ii) 8
iii) 7
iv) 9

Jimmy - 27
i) 5
ii) 8
iii) 7
iv) 7

NaOnka - 32
i) 6
ii) 8
iii) 9
iv) 9

Joel - 30
i) 9
ii) 6
iii) 6
iv) 9

Julie - 36
i) 9
ii) 10
iii) 8
iv) 9

Matty - 38
i) 9
ii) 10
iii) 10
iv) 9

[NaOnka Mixon]

Aug 18, 2011 19:57:18 GMT -5 Rodger Bingham said:

NaOnka Mixon - WAY TOO LONG!!!!!!!!! - 29/40

I actually had so much more to my story, but I was already running late for work, so I had to wrap it up and skip the strategizing at camp and the Tribal Council questions, which I just planned to use to make fun of everyone more

[Sarah Jones]

Thanks Rodger you're sexy

[Carlos Bernard]

yea notice how neither of my top 2 choices won lol

[Joel Anderson]

I AM BORING MCBORINGSTON. =D